Why I Wrote “The Orion War”

I was reading a Sci-Fi novel a few years ago in which a group of primitive aliens were discussing their various religious beliefs.  One of these aliens turned to the human protagonist to ask about religion on Earth.  The human responded, rather snobbishly I thought, “Oh, we outgrew that stuff.”  I’ve known more than a few people who longingly await the day when religion is tossed upon the ash heap of history, and this attitude seems to be pervasive among science fiction authors as well.  “The Orion War” is my response.

1.3 Orion War

“What good has religion ever done for us?” these anti-religious individuals might ask.  They’d then point to the Inquisition, the Crusades, and the current discord over evolution, gay marriage, and stem cell research.  They might also point to the ongoing threat of Islamic fundamentalist terrorism.  Given all the trouble religion has caused us, wouldn’t it be better to simply eliminate the whole institution?

But let me ask who would Martin Luther King have been without his faith?  Or Gandhi?  Or Nelson Mandela?  I was once an agnostic; then, I became a Christian.  Although I still remain skeptical about many details of Judeo-Christian mythology, I have found a deep sense of peace and well being since my conversion.  Religion is not 100% good, I admit that, but it is not 100% bad either.  To think that we will simply “outgrow” it is, I believe, a narrow-minded attitude.

In “The Orion War,” I wanted to portray both sides of this debate.  The story is set in the distant future at a time when religion is outlawed.  The process of hunting down and uprooting secret religious communities has turned into a new Inquisition almost as ugly as the one once conducted by the Catholic Church.  But by the end, the persecuted Community of Christ is not without sin.  Though they start off with the best of intentions, these exiled Christians soon turn violent, waging a holy war for control of the Orion Nebula.

Today, I am posting the latest revisions to “The Orion War.”  I wanted to slow the pace of the story just a bit to give it some room to breathe.  Never before nor since have I written a short story on such an epic scale (with the possible exception of “The Wrong Future”).  I hope you will find the new version to feel less rushed and less hectic than the original.

Click here to start reading “The Orion War,” and please let me know what you think in the comments below.


1.1 Medusa Effect

It’s been a while since I updated anything on the Tomorrow News Network website.  I’ve been neck-deep in revisions of the 2012 stories for the last few months.  When I started writing T.N.N. over two years ago, I was very much a novice.  I’m not going to claim that I have since mastered the art of writing, but I am far more competent at my craft than I used to be.

I have also started working with an editor who has taught me the difference between “borders” versus “boarders,” “prescribed” versus “proscribed,” and “farther” versus “further.”  My editor has also called my attention to a number of other embarrassing errors that I am now in the process of fixing.

Today, I am happy to announce that the revised versions of the first two Tomorrow News Network stories are available here on the T.N.N. website.  Revisions of the third story are coming soon.  In fact, I had a meeting with my editor today concerning story #3, “The Orion War,” and she tells me that the updated version is much stronger than the original.

1.2 99 White Balloons

For those of you who’ve read these stories before, I hope you’ll take the time to read them again and see how they’ve improved.  And if you’re new to T.N.N., I beg your indulgence as this revision process goes forward.  Any typos or grammatical errors you find will be corrected in due time (probably).

Please click here to start reading the new version of “The Medusa Effect,” the “pilot episode” of the series.  Click here to read the new “99 White Balloons,” which focuses on the true story of Roswell.

2013 Blog of the Year Award

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On behalf of Talie, Mr. Cognis, and all the rest of the gang here at Tomorrow News Network, I want to send a big thank you to Linda Frindt for nominating us for this award.  Please check out Linda’s blog (click here).  It’s all about a life of writing, a life of faith, and the life of a person suffering from fibromyalgia.

As part of the rules for accepting this award, I’m supposed to nominate another deserving blogger.  Although I follow many different blogs, there’s one in particular that stands out: “Lawyer?  I Hardly Know Her” by Jenna Walker.  Jenna is a West Virginia lawyer aspiring to become a career writer.  She’s currently in the process of editing her book entitled Potpourri—Do Not Eat.

Jenna’s been going through some tough times of late, and she disappeared from the Internet for a while, but now she’s back!  I’m hoping this award will give her the push she needs to keep going and keep entertaining us with her unique brand of witty commentary on life.  And most importantly of all, the push she needs to finish that book!

Click here to visit Jenna’s blog, and be sure to congratulate her for this well deserved award.

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The instructions for this award are simple:

1 Select the blog(s) you think deserve the ‘Blog of the Year 2013’ Award

2 Write a blog post and tell us about the blog(s) you have chosen – there are no minimum or maximum number of blogs required – and ‘present’ the blog(s) with their award.

3 Let the blog(s) that you have chosen know that you have given them this award and share the instructions with them – (please don’t alter the instructions or the badges!)

4 Come over and say hello to the originator of the ‘Blog of the Year 2013’ Award via this link – http://thethoughtpalette.co.uk/blog-awards-2/blog-of-the-year-2013-award/

5 You can now also join the ‘Blog of the Year’ Award Facebook page – click the link here https://www.facebook.com/groups/BlogoftheYear/ and share your blog posts with an even wider audience.

6 And as a winner of the award – please add a link back to the blog that presented you with the award – and then proudly display the award on your blog … and start collecting stars…

Blog of The Year 2013 Award

Yes – that’s right – there are stars to collect!

Unlike other awards which you can only add to your blog once – this award is different!

When you begin you will receive the ‘1 star’ award – and every time you are given the award by another blog – you can add another star!

There are a total of 6 stars to collect.

Which means that you can check out your favourite blogs – and even if they have already been given the award by someone else – you can still bestow it on them again and help them to reach the maximum 6 stars!

Sneak Peak at the New Cover Art!

In 2012, I wrote ten Tomorrow News Network stories, nearly one per month.  I’d hoped to do the same in 2013, but life got in the way.  At this point, in mid-November, it should be clear that I’m not going to be able to finish the next five stories by December 31st.  So those will have to wait until 2014.

But I do have some good news.  My plans to re-release the 2012 stories as an ebook are now back on track.  They’ll soon be available on Amazon Kindle, both as individual stories and as an anthology.  Shortly thereafter, there will also be a version of the anthology in print thanks to Amazon’s Create Space service.

I don’t have any release dates yet, but they’re coming soon.  Today, I can offer you a sneak peak at the cover art for the anthology.  Obviously I still have to add the title and my name, and I might tweak a few small details before I send it off to Amazon, but basically here’s it is!  Please let me know what you think!

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As the anthology comes together, I’ll have more updates for you, so please remember to follow this blog.  In the meantime, the stories are still available for free here on the Tomorrow News Network website.

New Story: Einstein’s Clone

When Albert Einstein died, his doctors removed his brain, hoping to figure out what made him such a genius.  3,000 years later, scientists working for the Earth Empire have extracted Einstein’s genetic material from a sample of preserved brain tissue.  Now eleven-year-old “Albert” is the Empire’s secret weapon in its conquest of the galaxy.  They’ve set him to work developing new weapons and military tactics, bending the laws of physics to achieve victory on the battlefield.  Warfare in space will never be the same.

The only problem: little Albert doesn’t know what his “math homework” is really being used for.  History says the original Einstein didn’t approve of war.  If he ever learned the truth, the new Einstein probably wouldn’t approve either.

Click here to start reading “Einstein’s Clone.”

Preview of “Einstein’s Clone”

When Albert Einstein died, his doctors removed his brain for further study.  They’ve discovered some clues about why the man was such a genius (click here to read about that), but in the distant future the preserved portions of his brain will be put to a better use.

Some time around the year 5,000, the Earth Empire will clone Einstein.  They’ll need a man of his singular intelligence to solve one of the greatest mysteries in the known universe: how does Talie Tappler’s time machine work?

Here’s a brief preview scene from “Einstein’s Clone.”  Expect to see the full story sometime next week.

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Albert sat cross-legged on the floor, still dressed in his favorite dinosaur pajamas.  He smirked, reflecting on the latest mischief he’d caused as he watched the armed guards rummaging through his things.

TAU-001 inched toward Albert, but she backed off as soon as the soldiers took note of her.  The robot fidgeted with her hands.  Her pincer-like fingers trembled, and the ticks and clicks of her internal hardware seemed to accelerate.  Her tiny scanner eyes focused on Albert, the boy she was programmed to raise and nurture; then she turned her gaze to the soldiers once again.

“Don’t worry, TAU,” Albert said.  “Father’s invested way too much money in me to risk harming me now.”

“Affirmative, Master Albert,” TAU said, a hint of uncertainty in her synthesized voice.  If Albert hadn’t known better, he might have thought the robot was nervous.

One of the soldiers dumped Albert’s toys on the floor and began sorting through action figures and miniature spaceships.  Another ransacked Albert’s bed, tossing aside sheets and pillows and slicing open the mattress with a sonic knife.  Other soldiers checked the bathroom, searched the closet, and tried to make sense of the clutter on Albert’s desk.

“Well?” the guard corporal said.

One of his men glanced up and shook his head no.

“Alright, kid,” the corporal said, pulling a blaster pistol and aiming it at Albert.  “I’m done fooling around.  Where is your math homework?”

“What math homework?” Albert asked.

“Robot!” the corporal shouted.  “Did you deliver a datapad to this room last night?  A datapad with a series of chronometric equations?”

“Affirmative,” TAU answered, her voice positively panicked.

Albert blinked innocently.  “I guess I lost it.”

The guard corporal scowled, the leathery skin of his face contorting in frustrated hate.  He lowered his weapon and put it away.  Then he snapped his fingers, and two soldiers grabbed Albert, hauling him to his feet.

Albert smirked as they dragged him into the hallway.  He hadn’t expected Father’s guards to have such a violent reaction to a missing homework assignment, but human behavior depended upon so many hidden variables.  It made people hard to predict, which was a major reason why Albert preferred the company of robots.  Still, everything the soldiers said and did helped confirm Albert’s latest theory: his math homework was not math homework at all.

Albert winked at TAU before the door slid shut.

The Void People

I’d like to announce that a short article I wrote for Sci Fi Ideas has been posted as part of their Alien August competition.  The article profiles the Void People, an alien race who live inside an artificial black hole.  I feel truly honored to have something I wrote on such a great website.  Please click here to see my article.

If you write Science Fiction, Sci Fi Ideas is the perfect place to find a little inspiration.  They don’t usually publish completed stories but rather brief articles suggesting plot ideas or describing potential settings, characters, or alien races.  Anyone can then come and develop those ideas under a creative commons license.

I don’t go there so much to get ideas for my stories but to help keep my mind open to the many possibilities Science Fiction can offer.  Science Fiction relies on strange, unconventional ideas.  Often, the stranger and more unconventional the idea, the better the story will be.  We need websites like Sci Fi Ideas to keep us from rehashing plots from Star Trek over and over again and to keep us thinking about all the weird, crazy things that can happen in this universe.

So I hope you’ll go check out my article on the Void People, and be sure to bookmark or subscribe to Sci Fi Ideas.  They’ve got a lot of cool stuff, so it’s worth wasting a few hours browsing through their posts.  Maybe you’ll find an idea or two for your next science fiction adventure.

P.S.: I’d like to call special attention to “The Planet Brokers” by Dan Palacios.  It’s one of the rare completed stories published on Sci Fi Ideas.  I read it only a few days ago, and it’s the best Science Fiction story I’ve encountered in a long, long time.  It’s about the day we sold the planet Venus to alien prospectors.  Click here to start reading “The Planet Brokers.”

Harmonia’s Poem

As a writer, one of the toughest decisions I have to make is when to remove something from my story.  No matter how much I may like it, no matter how much time and effort I put into it, if it doesn’t work it has to go.

For “The Flood of Atlantis,” the most recent Tomorrow News Network story, I wrote a poem for a young woman named Harmonia.  Harmonia is an Atlantian prostitute, a career she chose because it provided her better opportunities in an age when women enjoyed little freedom.  But for obvious reasons, working as a prostitute in any era comes with some painful sacrifices.

Whether Harmonia is criticizing Atlantian society with this poem or subtly condemning herself would have been open to the reader’s interpretation.  Either way, the poem said something about Harmonia’s character.  It fit her well; it just didn’t fit the scene for which it was written.

Tell me when
Are we to go,
Leaving behind
The false country
We know?

Let’s go somewhere
Where men don’t lie,
Where women don’t cheat,
Where the word love
Means not deceit.

 Could such a land
In truth exist?
Or does my song
Pure dreams